What's a Kiss?

"Nami...what's a kiss?"
he flashed that famous grin of his at her and she sighed
"...I'll show you"

okay I admit, I'm addicted to Luffy X Nami things...and other...pairings..

so yes, this is just a quick piece and nothing too major, although I get the feeling the background colours are too bold... eh well

but can I just ask one thing, can anyone please give me a few tips on line work, nothing too major, just something that will help me understand how to get it neater than it is

Luffy and Nami belong to Almighty ODA!!!

(btw, it did originally have tongues...and I can't remember why I took them out)